Draft music Video - Feedback

• Establishing shot – maybe try one without people in to create a feel of isolation.
•  Shot of coming out of bath, make longer so we can see face completely emerge out of the water or shorten shot so audience cannot see face emerge at all. It looks like we cut the shot in an inappropriate place.
•  Exterior shots – Looks more uncomfortable, looks at us for reassurance unlike interior shots where she is looking at the audience however quality of shots distract from the therefore no necessary need for change. Perhaps make some shots shorter for further improvements.